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Dying For Your Love

I used to think our love was true
And that I’d always be with you

I used to think you’d love me forever
And that we’d always be together

But as I look, I now see
How more wrong, could I be?

Now, my hopes and dreams are broken
For, those three words, were not spoken

So that is why, I now know
To free me from your cold heart I must go

I say goodbye, through this knife
And for you, I must end my life

And now, as I die, I must ask
Before I complete the fatal task

There is one last thing I cannot see
Why could you not love me?

Author notes

This is my first poem I have ever posted on here. So sorry it's really bad.
Written September 27th, 2006

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  • ThisIsHardcore-X
    September 27, 2006
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    Thanks! It's one of my first poems ever, and I didn't really know what people would think of it as I've kinda only just started using this site.

  • Zephyrcloud
    September 27, 2006
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    this is kick ass!well done,its beautiful.xXx