Do not cry little one
He wipes away the tears from her small little face
Everything will be alright
He climbs into bed next her
I will not let anyone harm you
Pulling her closer to him
You will always be safe with me
As he begins to fondle her...
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Written September 27th, 2006
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Oh Gosh!
Wow, this is a sad and deep piece.
It's sad to know that there are people
like this in the world today. You said
a lot in these eight lines here.
Great work and thanks for sharing this.
I hope to read more from you soon!
Jeremy0826 -
ohh geeze...
holy...omg...i was waiting for it to be like i will get the monster out of the closet or something...wow this is like really really deep..i mean for being so short...geeze...omg...i just can onyl say omg so many times...your writes are just brillant...i swear this poem is just amazing..im still speechless...wow...i still wonder how you come up with it...i mean i know that this poem brings up a lot of problems that some families have...but im hoping it has never happened to anyone you know...becuase you know how much grief that must bring? i just hope that this poem was for just emotional purposes and not history...
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A very very deep sad piece
This really hits home. Very very strong piece indeed. It starts off innocent, but the the reader very quickly realises what is going on. A great piece of writing - if not horrific.
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thank you so much for the lovely comment. Yes please let's keep in touch!
Kukana -
Man- I have never seen you write a poem like this one. I loved it though don't get me wrong (Even though it was sad- And I can also say I can relate to this. I have been abused many of times) And Sis you know what? I have missed you so darn much. It has been a while but I have been in and out of the hospital- I also had to have a few surgeries done since the last time we spoke. If you read my last story I wrote it will talk about one of them that I had done. The story is called Sad but true part two... Keep up the work and start writing some more.
Let's now forever keep in touch. Even through E-mail if we must. I truly do need someone right now. Here's my name E-mail address. Even though it will make you laugh Iwillbelovinu@aol.com Yeah- yeah I know it's funny. See ya my loving friend.
Jynnette
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Sleezy SOB'S! Hope there's a lower level in hell made custom for these types. That's how the abuse begins.Great short power packed piece.~~Suseann
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sad also hits home for me BIG TIME but still great work
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This hits home Sue. Beautiful write as usual.
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