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Have you ever played the flute to the rain?

Have you ever played the flute to the rain like me
Do you ever tell trees of all the things you see
Could you ever give a smile to a stranger face
Don’t mind loosing all the shelter that it gives
To be locked inside
You own despise
When the hole world misses you outside

Have you ever played piano in an empty room
Will I ever find you dancing to the rising moon
Can you give you self the chance just to be amazed
Don’t care for stumbling the ground is not that hard
As your criticize
And perfect lies
You might never see it when the hole thing dies

When you tell that I shouldn't’t mind
You’re crying out for help
‘Cause you cannot let the girl inside you show
‘Cause you will not let anybody know

That you’ve …

Been dancing in you bed inside your privacy
That you’ve been humming all the tunes inside this melody
Without a single piece of cloth to have you covered up
In just one moment then you truly didn't’t care
With the curtains down
Not a soul around
Tell me have you ever felt so free?

So when you find you’re eyes are seeking for a “hold on to”
When they lower and you’re shoulders fail to keep a hold on you
Put your mind into that night when you did let it show
Rise your back and face the fact that you’re as weak
As the rest of us
The less of us
Can bear this wicked world all alone.

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Written September 27th, 2006

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  • Dragen2201
    September 27, 2006
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    outstanding

    amazing truly amazing you use flow and rythm in this poem to perfection a great write. i love the fact that you used music and dancing to express the feeling of freedom and carefree it's a beautiful poem