The fire roars, and my heart skips a beat as I lay my eyes upon her delicate body. It lies helpless on the floor, making it irresistible to do anything but fight for her freedom. I leap across the once beautiful castle's ruins and capture her in my arms. She follows me, only to find that we are trapped by the one true enemy of this world. His eyes light up with fury as I step in front of my one true love and attempt to fight one last time.
We fight as only epic warriors can, as fire and brimstone are our only accompaniment for this battle. I forgive him only for the looks, as what he's done to such a beautiful kingdom is truly disgusting. As i reach what seems to be a victory, a large phantom tail makes me lose my footing. I grab the edge of the molding stone before me, and hope to pull myself up. Flames raging, I pull myself up and brush off.
'This is it, This is the hour you fall.' He roars at me with such disrespect, that I abore his every whimper of regret. I pull out a fireball, and with one swift move, he is cast into the fiery hell he created. I grab her once again, and we run out of the castle to save ourselves. Moments later, we are outside in what appears to be paradise once more.
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Feeling accomplished, Brandon yawns and stretches his legs out. He walks now to the television and turns the console off. Saving the day is enough for one hour, right?
Author notes
Option 2
Game Boys, write me a poem or story or acrostic on super mario world
Written September 27th, 2006
A contest entry
- Options Contest by SMario15.
300 points, ended September 28, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Very Best #2 (pre-writes allowed) by Dark Whispers.
415 points, ended April 18, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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that's what i thought,mario! my sister's realy into that too,nice job!

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when I was younger I had a Nitendo 64 and super mario 64 for and like you poem I loved it. thanks for entering.
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LOVED IT! I LOVE SUPER MARIOO AND WHEN I READ IT WAS LIKE .... THIS SHOUNDS FAMILIUAR! lmao!
I lvoed it! It was SO AMAZING!!!!!!
I lvoe you <333 -
very good story you had done on Ninteno




