"Reserved "
These lips will never
say your name again,
Or touch yours with my sweet kisses,
These lips will never say to you, "I love you" again....
These eyes will never
look at you the same,
You wont see my love,hope or devotion shine from them,
For they will never again get lost while gazing into your eyes........
These arms will never
reach out to hold you again,
Or to embrace you with the comfort of
knowing I am here for you,a hug to show you how much I care......
For these lips,eyes and arms
will never await and want you like they used to,
Just like my heart, body,soul and mind,
It is reserved only for someone that is loyal,loving and true.
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Written September 27th, 2006
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Oh my gosh!! This almost made me cry, it's such a simple poem, but hits you hard...aimed at your heart! I LOVED THIS! Great job mama
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hey hey!
thanks sweety!! glad you like it!
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Hi Eddy~
Oh yeah you've got that right
! Thank you so much for reading,commenting and your applause! I appreciate it a lot!
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The freedom of choice will always be burdensome in some case, for no matter what our actions are, we can never, ever truly
determine what another's will be. The giving of love never guarantees the getting of love, but we must still give it unconditinally if we are to find it at all. There will always be givers and takers in the world and when two givers finally hook up...it's pure magic...
Hugs...Eddy -
Thank you Shey for your kind comment on my poem! I appreciate it a lot! I agree with you about the flow and free fall to it~~thought this pic would be perfect as it is a close up of a womans face~~LOL~thanks again my friend!
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So true Venessa~~thanks for reading and your comment~appreciate it
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Thank you grannyeri for reading and your comment! I appreciate it a lot!
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Thank you Aurielle for your comment! I appreciate it.
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LOL
about the pic! Only reason why the pic is used for is because its a close up of a womans eyes,mouth~~which a woman wrote this~cant help the size of the pic lol! Thanks for reading,your applause and comment! I appreciate it a lot!
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The look of your eyes says it all even with out words,
I loved this to bit, It expresses very clearly the rising of someone who is saying no more !!
And I think you have a little fan club growing with this one
I did not feel the flow was off, when writing of feelings and expression it has to have the free fall to it, for it to have
significant meaning.. And I felt you had acheived this
As always A joy to stop by your page.
Love and Light
Frozentearz -
lack of loyalty and broken hearts is a huge muse. A feeling we can all relate to at one point in life or another. nice job expressing yourself.
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Sentiments well expressed in these lines - easy to read and understand what you are saying here. Flows well.
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really strong yet the flow was off. Maybe an orgial metaphor would of make this peice seem much better. Yet the message was clear so Keep write you can express then you've been bless.
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It is a very good poem but the pic makes you not want to read it just because it has nothing to do with the peom its self. i think it would be better if you
reduced the size of the picture
got ride of the pic
or got a new pic
i just read this over and i realized i sound like a b**** i dont mean to it just was shock to see a pic that big and in ur face, because i expected to see the peom right away and i had to scroll for a while b4 i actualy got to it. im sorry if i seem rude i really enjoyed the peom but not the pic
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