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Motion

Observation,thought and creation
Existing and non existing in question
Living is breathing,all creation is motion
Here and there,the two have connection
 
Man`s life is a mere impulse he enjoys
Caused by a force in a given time duration
Its magnitude suggests man`s own longevity
He lives while earns both,deeds and coins.
         
Alas! the speech-less large stones
Compared with those who have been born
With flesh,blood and well built bones
All are living things,with and without horns
   
Living is existing,in a mere fact
Stones live,though do not have visible motion
But elements are dynamic, not static
Electrons move a specific type of motion!

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The living
Written September 27th, 2006

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