Blood spitting eyes... by Wolf Mistress at All poetry

Deadly shades coming at night;
exposure bloodstained memories
A curtain of blood over strains me;
taking me with overwhelming rage

The howling screams of darkness
drowning into my poisoned mind
This hungry voice calls me
to another blessed place

My soul will be cleaned
by the sword that scratches my skin
Blood, sweet and warming;
I crawl underneath its stream

Distraction regains all over my body,
heated, willing to come
I feel no shame, only desire
for those eyes will take me in

Heart of tears viewing the tombstone;
absorbing my lost soul
Desperately out of control
in those blood spitting eyes

Grabbed by hell;
squeezing my last breath of life
Finally feel the passionate re-birth
of eternal being home

Author notes

2. Write me something dark because I luv dark poetry. Keep swearing to a minimum thought. Really too much swearing clutters up a poem. Prewrites aloud on this one.

This is one of my favorite dark writes....I guess sometimes when life really get's you down we all wish and dream to find eternal rest..........

I hope you're going to write a lot of good stuff...and sorry to see you leave AP....

Written September 27th, 2006

In a list

My black wolf... • next in list

A contest entry

gimme your worst nightmares!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Life Is A Game. 420 points, ended July 7, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
short, colorful, to the point by Avani. 800 points, ended December 24, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Good-bye Contest I'm Leaving AP (just added points) by BeautifullyBroken42. 576 points, ended January 12, 29 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

What did you think

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Maxboy
January 12

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A very good dark poem, I am not into dark much, but you do a wonderful job with it.

Great Work....Best wishes in the contest
Beating
February 8, 2008

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You are very good at writing dark poetry, and this is one of the really good ones. I'm impressed. I especially enjoy the ending stanza, and the ending line. They're just really epic!
SoftlyScreaming
July 2, 2007

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well its better than the other one i'll admit, but you died in this one... still not what i wanted... and you didnt really state why you wanted to die.. its better than the last one, and ill be happy to keep this one up.. but the contest ends in 10 days so if you want to (you dont have to, and please dont be mad with me, i like happy people) within those ten days write a new poem... but i liked this, it did have emotion in it, and i like that.. thats why i said ill keep this one
- Wolf Mistress
  July 2, 2007
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Huntress
September 29, 2006
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We all have a little of the darkness inside of us Excellent poem good luck in the contest
Wolf Mistress
September 29, 2006
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catz
September 29, 2006
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I thought this was probably the one... I'm glad you were able to finally get it posted. I always do my work in word first then copy and paste to AP, and eventually get them transfered to disc...just in case my pc AND AP crash...lol

Dee
Wolf Mistress
September 29, 2006
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Thnxs Catz...this is the poem dear Kevin had to delete after the gold membership So glad I save my poems most of the times in Word

Thnxs for your wonderful comment
XXJeannette
catz
September 29, 2006
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OOOOHHH, I like creepy stuff, Wolf Mistress, and this is very good. the picture is great with what you wrote. Good luck inthe contest

Dee
FifthDove
September 29, 2006
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Very good write. The picture goes so well with what you wrote. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
♥ C ♥ O ♥ T ♥ T ♥ O ♥ N ♥
angel-lover
September 29, 2006
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this is awesome.
Ezilana
September 29, 2006
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Wow, yes this is pitch black with darkness and a great way of expressing those feelings that is present in everybody who dare to look within and acknowledge them. Very good!
Wolf Mistress
September 28, 2006
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Don't be scared Jeannette

You know my darkside is always sleeping...only in my poems it comes out so now and then

Thnxs for your comment, as always made me smile

XXJeannette
Wolf Mistress
September 28, 2006
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Thnxs for your nice comment,

Glad you were glued to the screen then
I made this poem out of my dark side...haha and the picture fits in just like that

XXJeannette
Wolf Mistress
September 28, 2006
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Thnxs countrybabe,

For your wonderful comment,
and concerns the picture..yes what can I say..
XXJeannette
Wolf Mistress
September 28, 2006
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Thank you DarkHunter,
This dark side is indeed satisfying for the soul sometimes
Thnxs for your great comment as always
Wolf Mistress
September 28, 2006
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Thnxs Huntress

XXJeannette
Wolf Mistress
September 28, 2006
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Hi Frances,

Thnxs for you wonderful comment...glad to see you back so now and then..I am having not to much time lately, just try to keep on writing so now and then.And reading in between too..so watch out for I will be visiting real soon
Hope you are okay too
XXJeannette
A Beautiful Lie
September 28, 2006
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That picture... so spoOky. And your words, very chilling... I loved it! lol. You really painted such a vivid picture with your words. Gosh... I sure have missed reading your poems. I must make more time to come and catch up soon. Hope you are well friend
- Frances
Huntress
September 27, 2006
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Your poem matches the picture Good luck in the contest
Ethereal One
September 27, 2006
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excellent presentation
you are scaring me Jeannette. LOL..Not really. You have done a great job on this poem. Your words show such vivid and horrific images to the reader.
Great picture too.
Best wishes in the contest!

Brise molle
Warrior7
September 27, 2006
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Excellent, imagery was awesome, horror writes always keep me glued to the screen actually i'm like that with movies also..
Great work, goodluck
countrybabe
September 27, 2006
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Awesome
Great piece of work you have done here. Truly, you have done an awesome job. Very dark and very captivating indeed. I love the picture as well. Good luck in this contest.

Keep writing

Countrybabe
DarkHunter
September 27, 2006
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Excellent
This is an awesome dark piece with powerful imagery. I enjoy reading poetry from your darkside, it's satisfying for the soul! Best of luck in the contest. James.