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Whispering Winds (Prayer)

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NATIVE AMERICAN PRAYER

Hear the wind, it whispers softly
Adrift with peace, it blows anew
The evening star, the morning sun
Are waiting beyond just for you

A tempest calm, subsiding storm

My prayer of peace I bring today
The circle of life never ends
Mmay it continue for you I pray

Like the wolf on the prairie
You shall always wander free
To always walk, here beside me
Is where your spirit shall always be

May you always walk in God's light
Tthroughout the heavens so clear
When it is time to wander free
They'll be no more pain, nor fear

Let the wind comfort your hurting
Let it release all of your pain
When it is time to leave this earth
Walk in sunshine beyond the rain

Author notes

May Whispering Wolf, Rob, be comforted and brought some peace with our prayers of love and concern.
Written September 27th, 2006

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  • HurricaneJay
    September 27, 2006
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    Sandygram, thank you for your truly amazing prayer and blessing here. The words flow so smoothly and are very comforting to the mind and soul.

    Jay

  • pozo
    September 27, 2006
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    I found this quite a peaceful poem. I liked the flow of this. Good use of narrative. Again a beautiful use of rhyme, you’re a great rhymer, my friend I liked the spiritual side of this poem, I felt it was also a poem of nature. Good use of natural imagery. This was a beautiful, relaxing poem
    Thanks for your comment
    All the best
    Your friend
    Pozo


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 27, 2006
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    Thank you so much for entering your prayer. You have made it very personal to his beliefs and I like that. You have no idea how much I appreciate this, so thank you again.

    Storm


  • Image and Visions silver member
    September 27, 2006
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    sandy, another good piece, it read very rythmatically and had a feeling of the spirit of the wolf you wanted to achieve. image and Visions

  • Linda Sue silver member
    September 27, 2006
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    Wow Sis ~ This is really beautiful and so comforting. A very heartfelt prayer. It's almost too spirtual to be part of a contest My prayers to Whispering Wolf. Love ~ Linny


  • Wolfdog silver member
    September 27, 2006
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    Superb/Compassionate

    Aye, may peace be with him. A very good write; reminds me of my poem Bridges, which is why I can relate to what u wrote.


  • Keith Drew gold member
    September 27, 2006
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    beautiful

    A wonderful prayer to heal the soul and stop the fears within the heart.May the Wolf find peace both in Spirit and heart.

  • nikki4
    September 27, 2006
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    nice rhymes
    keep writing well done

  • abbismapoet
    September 27, 2006
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    Nice piece. comforting and refreshing but there seems to be a stronger depth in you than this... keep it up.

  • Mariah Kay
    September 27, 2006
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    This is a FANTASTIC piece of work here. May God bless you for spreading the word. God Bless!


  • September 27, 2006
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    You said it all. Absolutely outstanding write. It is a winner in my eyes. Good luck. Sunshinze


  • Frozentearz
    September 27, 2006
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    I also found this to be very soothing,
    alas we Cain't stop what is meant to be but we can
    offer warmth, and you have done that
    Thanks for sharing and my prayers are sent.
    Love and Light to all
    Frozentearz


  • Somebody-New
    September 27, 2006
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    very touching piece, with very soothing words. really makes you drift away while reading it. your rhyme is excellent and adds to the poem, to make it all in all a fabulous read. thanks for sharing, i hope your poem/prayer helps people for you


  • Freelance writer
    September 27, 2006
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    The soothing breeze, the calming mind and the awakened self are all so good things to have. Your poem give me this feeling.


  • FaeryPixieFey
    September 27, 2006
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    I loved this so that I sit in another puddle of my tears. Please don't blame yourself Dear. Dang they are never ceasing it seems. Sometimes I wonder how I even exist with my brother not on our earthly realm.

    Soft and caressing is the whisper of death to one who lives true. Gentle winds calling sometimes calling for you. To be able to have the chance to know I was in deaths dance, would bring joy unfold, it would be a gift greater than gold. I had no clue when my brother died that he'd be gone and I'd be alive.


  • babys-no-angel
    September 27, 2006
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    if only we could all be at one with the spirit..beautifully penned
    xxx

  • mmook
    September 27, 2006
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    Beautiful
    You have penned a masterpiece here. Your words flow like a fine brandy. I too had to reread and reread again and for nothing more except for the enjoyment of reading your words.

    Beautiful!


  • nilav
    September 27, 2006
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    these words bring solace to anybody in pain.i enjoyed this prayer with the smooth flow of words and a strong presence of nature

  • irys
    September 27, 2006
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    very good

    Wow, your poem was great! It was really touching and what impressed me the most were the last two verses. Congratulations and good luck in the contest!

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