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Invitation of Love

I've been waiting for you for so long.
But you are lost somewhere else
Perhaps the roads are wrong.
But I'm happy to say
That love finds a way.
And you are not any more away.

You are destined to come to me,
There's no way to flee.
Magic of love makes you feel free
Within the prison of my arms.

Have you ever looked at my eyes?
I know they are not so nice.
They don't glitter like stars.
But whenever they shine,
You'll find yourself in those eyes of mine.
My eyes can't show you the entire world
But they wanna see everything with you.
Tears are not like diamond
But they come in these eyes when you are not around.

I'm a mystery
That is created for you.
I'm a book of history
Written only for you.
I'm that hidden treasure
That can bring pleasure
only to YOU.
Among all the old stories
I'm the new
Because I'm made only for you.

So, this is an invitation
Full of love and passion
For You my love
I'm your destination.

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Written September 27th, 2006

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  • Ice queen 17
    March 21, 2007
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    this is very sweet great job good luck and thankyou so much for entering my contest.


  • Shapla
    September 27, 2006
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    Thanks for the encouragement. I'm glad that somehow u loved it. thanks a lot.


  • Filia-Dei
    September 27, 2006
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    haha love it!...sorry about the laugh..but i loved that rhyme at the end!

    great job..good luck

    keep it up!