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sauske and itatchi (till i kill you)

Every day I want to kill you
Every day I want to forgive you
But now that I see who you truly are
I detest you with all my heart
Sometimes I can't even cry for the death of our parents
All I ever feel is the hate that we have in our eyes
Why did you destroy the ones we loved
Why did you hurt me
Why have brought pain in my eyes
I use to love you
I use to look up to you
But I just hate you
So answer me this one simple question
Why?

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Written September 26th, 2006

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  • EvenStarsBreak--x
    February 19, 2007
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    wow... This is really good, i like it alot. Good job.


  • Angel Lunarious
    February 11, 2007

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    This poem is really nice! Ahhh! Sasuke looks for an anwser that Itachi proboly won't answer...But what if he did? That sure would be a shocker!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • AssumingRain
    January 3, 2007
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    4 out of 5

    this is a great poem.keep it up.


  • KillingBlood
    December 22, 2006

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    Why ?

    because i wanted power the more power the farter away Orochimaru stays.

    P.S. Orochimaru likes Itachi


  • Violent Messiah
    September 26, 2006
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    I would have to say that this is the first Naruto poem I've ever read. Great job!!! No mention of sharingan though. No worries. Keep writing!!!

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