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His Grand Plan

What I see is so far,

yet,

I feel I can reach out

and touch a star.

Its sparkle

calms me on moonless night.

An arrangement of beauty

crafted by the Master’s hand.

Knowledge expended, only,

when man can understand.

Set at a distance we can glance.

To visit impossible,

except,

in a dream.

 


A journey to the stars does await a man,

who dreams his dream will come true

when his time in life is through.

Transported in a manner

we cannot comprehend,

heaven's location,

part of his grand plan.


 

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Written September 26th, 2006

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 30, 2008
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    What a lovely topic..God arranged transportation to heaven as we end our time on earth."Transported in a manner we cannot comprehend, heaven's location, part of his grand plan"
    Appreciate your faith being shared. We need our faith even more these days,,,Lovely write!


  • Parearoo
    September 26, 2006
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    Always a joy to read!

    How you ever manage to experss yourself so vividly and amazing is an accomplishment I'm sure most poets wish they had!
    I love the way this poem flows and how the words are tied together so easy. Almost like an expert craftsman spent hours for this one masterpeice.
    Mac, over all, this is a truly amazing peice of work; one that I hope you are proud of.
    I also hope you and your wife are doing alright.