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One Dream

One dream may stay alive,


another may rocket to the


sky; from clouds to the Earth


from the bees to the seas,A


dream never dies it is always alive.



I your heart in God's hand it is just


like a command,only gentle like a


summer morning breeze.



A fake dream will fall apart because


it was not in your heart, and that was


the devils part.



So hold your dream in heart because


that was your God given part.


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Written September 26th, 2006

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  • duana
    June 30, 2007
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    You think this is bad poetry? I don't get it. You'll have to help me with this one.