A little boy standing alone
Center of attention in an empty silent room
Like twiddling life away
Waiting for the fist that never goes away
You'll never know
A scene of profanity
Bruise marks dotting the crime
But what's a boy to do
He paints a masterpiece across his face
All the way around, below, above, and aside
Canvas to His weakness
His fragile little letdown let-out
But you'd never know
A play on killed innocence
By the sight of bloody tragedy
A boy with no mental boundaries
Scarring his life He never lets up
Counterexample to a simple conjecture:
'What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger.'
Mentality dies, emotion breaks in two
But what's a little boy to do
Author notes
First attempt at anything concerning abuse. Notice the capital 'he's, those are to identify the abuser. Yeah. Inspired, unfortunately, by a very close friend. You know who you are. Of course he's a lot older now, almost twenty, but you how that stuff goes. Uhm. I think it's terrible but I think it turned out better than I ever thought it would be. Mmm. Of course it's lacking a bunch of stuff because I've never been in this position luckily, but.. I don't know, you'll never know until you try, so I tried. There.
Written September 26th, 2006
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eliiiiiii!!!! ahahahh i luffs him very muchs
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Awwwww, our poor davy-chan! Xx Its good, and cute. Like Eli! You should overcome this writers block no inspiration ... thing!
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~Kiara Kuro -Teh Lovely Kelsey-chan.~
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Aww I know. Thank you :] And good luck with that publishing thing lol I luff you too :] "I just died in your arms tonight" :] lol Thanks for the applause and comment
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omigee. so sad. hahahh. but its a good poem. i swear imk stealing your poems and publiushing them for you =] because i loffle you dearly. but yeah. it shows the abuse. mhmm. not good with comments i am. damn me.
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Self abuse? Was in there no where. But.. uh.. right. Thanks though :]
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It was ok... You got the point across on self-abuse, and the whole what dont kill you makes you stronger thing, was a good addition. Over-all, it wasn't your best but wasn't your worst either, it was in the middle. Good Job, you did just good enough for an applause :]
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