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L-o-v-e

Love is like wild flowers blowing in the wind.


Beautiful, pretty and glowing.


Love knows no boundaries, no misfortunes, or mistakes,


Hearts and Valentines Day are the icons of love,


But love is just a 4 letter word,


L for Lust


O for your other being there for you


V for St. Valentines


E is for Eternity.


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Written September 26th, 2006

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  • ForbiddensCure
    May 3, 2008

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    This was interesting. I liked the first and third lines the best. I liked the imagery of the first line as well.


  • Hirestel
    October 11, 2006
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    Interesting. I liked it. THe flow was a little wierd but that's okay. Nice jop