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Jesus is coming

I tell you now, loud and clear

Jesus is coming, he's very near.


Prepare your hearts, pray and repent

Clear your mind of any bad content.


Raise your hands and praise the Lord

Eternal life in Heaven is your great reward!


Read the Bible, it's our book of life

Follow that and you'll end your strife.


Praise and give thanks to the one above

For on that cross he first showed you great love.




Kristi McEntire

  9-26-06


Author notes

Just a simple little ditty about the second coming of the Lord Jesus Christ. It's so very important and a very crucial time and this is simple and to the point, yet laid on my heart so very strongly. Blessings.
Written September 26th, 2006

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  • aeolia
    November 17, 2007

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    The rhymes are predictable and forced, and I can't read this without cringing from both the bad rhyme and the content. To each her own, they say.

    Gosh, I'm glad to be an atheist.


  • jjbreunig3
    February 28, 2007

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    A cute and delightful write...

    A cute and delightful write; yes, He is coming and we must remain vigilant until that blessed day; nicely done. Perhaps you would enjoy my poem "Green Meadows". --Joe


  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    October 26, 2006
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    YES, AMEN. I'm so happy you come to check me out, I have so many poems I'm sure you would love. I am happy you like my name. Sharcu is a wonderful person, I have a special place in my heart for him. Blessings to you.


  • Molassis
    October 24, 2006
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    First of all... I LOVE your name... I saw it on my lil brother's (Sharcu) group application page and just had to come and read one of your poems...

    This is very good and contains perfect truth... He is about to split the sky... return and collect us... and I do hope it's soon...

    God bless you...

    ~Melissa


  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    October 2, 2006
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    Thank you for reading MiscSad-Poet. I appreciate your time and I am very happy that you like this poem. It definitely came from my heart and Jesus definitely is alive and well and living there! I just changed my name to this, it hit me one day in prayer, so I can honestly say that God gave it to me! Thanks for the read, hope you can check out some more. Blessings

  • MiscSad-Poet
    October 2, 2006
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    First I want to say Thank you for the comment. This is a beautiful poem you wrote about Jesus and repenting. I have to say, I like your poet name as well. Sharcu, yeah, I like his author page, it's beautiful. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work.


  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    September 28, 2006
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    thank you wings of an angel. I appreciate your comment and I'm happy you read it and like it. Blessings.


  • wings of an angel
    September 28, 2006
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    This is a very good write that you had penned here your rhyme and rhythm flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem


  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    September 26, 2006
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    I'm glad you like it. Yes that day will be grand!! We'll get to go home with our father and see our loved ones that are there waiting. Praise God! Thank you for reading and actually leaving a comment. I appreciate your time. Have a great day!


  • poetryality silver member
    September 26, 2006
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    Oh yes! HE is coming and won't that day be grand. For some anyway. Sound the alarm. That is what you did with this poem. The Words is out and has been, time for people to take heed. Great little ditty.

    Much Love & Many BLessings ♥

    Renee

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