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Keep This In Mind

I wish you the best


In all of your life


Hopefully your world will


Be filled with less strife



It will only get better


From here on out


Please keep that in mind


When you are in doubt



You are a great person


Wonderful and kind


No matter what happens


Keep that in mind



 Laughing I love you Kari!!!! Laughing


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Written September 26th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • watching the time
    October 3, 2006
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    I like this I really do...very good write... love it!!!!!!!
    -Mary-


  • individuality gold member
    October 2, 2006
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    aye to hope - let it fill the spirit and overflow so it may touch others. a good poem that dances in positive light. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


  • Firequeen
    September 27, 2006
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    so simple yet so deep.
    truly touching
    very sweet
    good luck to you in the contest
    Firequeen


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 26, 2006
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    Sweet Simple, caring, lovely are the words that come to mind when reading this piece. A fine gift to a friend...
    Love,
    Lane


  • Kari gold member
    September 26, 2006
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    Good Luck!

    awwwwwww this was so very precious hun...thanks so much sweety..the best of luck to you in the contest hun
    Love you sis!

    Kari

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