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Horse shoe bend

The midnight moon was full.

“Burn for you” echoed across the Murray,From an unseen source.

Shadows danced around the campfire.

Crisp night air made it all clear.

River slowly creeping past,

So as not to disturb the tranquility at

“Horse shoe bend” 

Never wanting the peace to end.

Can’t go back to the life

I came here to escape.

Eyes must stay open,

Give in to sleep and this night

Will be lost to memory at

“Horse shoe bend”

 Sharing body heat, wrapped in a rug,

As the fireworks joined the moon and stars

Glowing in an inky sky.

Feeling safe at last, in his

Forbidden, innocent embrace, at

“Horse shoe bend” 

Dawn would find me bathing

Naked in the icy flow.

Washing away years of pain,

If only for a day.

Early morning birdsong

To share the moment at

“Horse shoe bend”

All too soon, the packing begins.

Tents folded, ropes and pegs bagged,

Sleeping bags rolled and stuffed

Into covers way too small.

Campfire reduced to ashes,

Brings reality crashing home

Time to leave

“Horse shoe bend” 

Leave me here in this heaven on earth.

Nothing good to go back to.

Deception, heartbreak, pain.

Can’t bear to face it any more.

A peace not felt since childhood dreams.

My eyes drink in the scene

Etching every tree and rock to my memory, of

“Horse shoe bend” 

Tears well as we drive away.

The river disappears from view.

I feel it drag the calm from my soul,

As I say goodbye forever to peace, and

“Horse shoe bend”

Author notes

Just a memory.  When ever I hear John Farnham sing "Burn for you" I still get goose bumps remembering the echo across the river, and everybody falling silent to listen.
Written September 26th, 2006

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  • paullallady silver member
    May 6, 2007

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    What a beautifully descriptive piece of writing with an underlying sadness throughout. Joy at the experience and sadness at the inevitable ending of it. great job on this. I had to read it again. It is really good, I have it bookmarked, lol.

  • paullallady silver member
    October 15, 2006
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    wonderful

    You have done a wonderful job of describing your "heaven on earth". It is so sad also because you write about leaving this for "deception, heartbreak, pain". It makes my heart weep
    for you to have to leave this place. Such vivid imagery, amazing.


  • PoetsAngel
    September 26, 2006
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    T. I love this, I have camped at that very spot....AAAAHHHHHH if only life could always be that peaceful...

    Great job on this Hun