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Maybe He'll Notice

They lived in the same house, but they were like strangers now


He would go off to work and stay gone most of the night


While she worried about him, wondering if he was alright


She told herself that there was more to life than this


And she was getting tired of just being there and most importantly


Being taken for granted




She wrote him a letter, to tell him that she felt like


A stranger to him instead of his wife


And that she was going to try to start a better life


Then she ended the letter


Maybe you'll notice me now




Maybe he'll notice her now


Now that she's out of the door


And out of his life


Maybe he'll see just how much he needs her


And that he can't live without her


Maybe he'll notice her now




A few weeks went by and he was about ready to die


He realized he couldn't live without her by his side


But it was too late


Cause when he called, another guy picked up the phone and said




She was right, you noticed her now that she is gone


And in someone else's arms


I would die without her with me


This you should have seen while she was there


But maybe you'll notice her now


Now that she's with me




Maybe he'll notice her now


Now that she's out the door


And out of his life


Maybe he'll see how much he needs her


And that he can't live without her


Maybe he'll notice her now




Maybe he'll notice her now....


Now that its too late.....






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Written September 26th, 2006

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  • breanne.elizabeth
    October 3, 2006
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    this was really good. the guy had to learn sometime!! This was great! never read anything like it! Keep it up! I like it!! It was great!!!

    ~~Lizzy~~

  • hiddenbeauty51011
    September 26, 2006
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    beautiful write, it totaly was like awesome


  • beautifulbrat
    September 26, 2006
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    Flavor Flavvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv!I'm glad that you liked this! No prob about the comment

  • beautifulbrat
    September 26, 2006
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    Its always been one of my favorite songs and I've been able to relate to it soooo many times. Have fun judging the contest.

  • Forgottenangel08
    September 26, 2006
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    WOW!!!!!!!!! flavor Flav lol i love this its sooooo darn sweet. thanx for the comment

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