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kari (gold trophy)


kari

once upon a time there was a little girl
whose life seemed to crumble before her
though she prayed and she cried
nothing seemed to help
until that fateful day when an angel stopped by
and carried little kari to safety

though scared and frightened
she began to realize
that she needed the strength, somehow, to fight
she’s come a long way
since those many years ago
and still has a ways to go

but she’s beginning to see
that life can be good
and her shining example of love
she shares with all she meets

I’ve come to know this child of God
in a most remarkable way
she loves, she cares
she dreams and hopes
just like the rest of us
but for her it’s an uphill struggle
and she’s making it
she keeps climbing

and she’s chosen me for her granna
to fill in for her beloved own real granna
she’s chosen me to help see her through
as she helps others see the way

she’s become so special in my life
and I wouldn’t trade her for the world


Dee Garner
© September 25, 2006



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Kari is a very special person and I thank God for bringing us together

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Written September 25th, 2006

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  • Ezilana
    November 26, 2006

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    Very special.

    I have read many of Kari's poems, and although I don't know her, this is a very beautiful tribute to her.

  • Kenshins wife
    October 6, 2006
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    congrast on the trophy. I love this peace. You have such a beautiful heart and this poem shows it. keep it up. My regards that she gets well soon.


  • Rubee
    October 4, 2006
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    Congratulations on the gold trophie Dee... so well deserved. This is filled with love and emotion and a lot of caring... something we all need. I hope she's feeling much better.. I'm sure this lovely poem helped... beautifully written, straight from the heart


  • Erotik Rose silver member
    September 30, 2006
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    Awwww... this was so special to read, true words spoken of Kari, she has had a lot of battles to fight and as all of us there will be more but her light shall shine brightly.
    Congrats on the gold.


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 29, 2006
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    Congratulations for winning gold in this contest with this great poem. Sentiments well expressed and easy to read and understand.


  • Kari gold member
    September 27, 2006
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    hehe Pozo yeah you do me crazy?? I am sane compared to some people!!


  • catz Moderators member
    September 27, 2006
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    Yep, I guess that means you do have an AP niece, pozo.. the two of you keep me hopping with trying to keep up with each of your poetry. I'm certainly blessed with the two of you and with the others who have become part of my AP family. I need to get busy and get you all added to my author page.

    Thank you for reading and commenting ...and yeah, she's a little crazy...lol.. a nice kinda crazy, though.

    love and
    Mum

  • pozo
    September 27, 2006
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    Does this mean I've got an AP niece? I hope so mom This was a lovely poem with a lot of love in it Keep writing, this was a beautiful tribute
    Thanks for your comment. She's a little crazy
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Firequeen
    September 27, 2006
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    what a beautiful write
    so sweet and touching.
    really loved it
    good luck to you in the contest.
    Firequeen


  • intanglio2ring
    September 26, 2006
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    Dear catz,
    You seem to hug those you love with such wonderful words of encouragement! This shows your tremendous heart!
    A blessing of a poem - and a wonderful entry! Good Luck!
    Tang


  • leo2
    September 26, 2006
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    What a nice compliment you have written to a fellow poet. The world would be a better place if we had more people like you.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Blankscreen2222
    September 26, 2006
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    This is so lovely. Such a beautiful piece.
    She is indeed a lucky girl to have such a wonderful granna in her life.
    Blank.


  • individuality gold member
    September 26, 2006
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    i think we all need someone in life and it is nice to have someone there who can take our hand and gently lead us along the curves of smiles. a nice piece to shake the sleep from my hair spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...

  • Kari gold member
    September 25, 2006
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    Good Luck in the contest!

    Granna you have no idea how very much this touched me.The background is special to me as well..I am going to put this on my BIO Page...I love you so so so so much granna

    Kari

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