-Wings fly-
Butterfly high
in the skies-Kari soars
to comfort and provide Love for
those in need of Touch from her gentle Hands.
She gives Gifts to others and shows
how much they mean to her.
Embrace given
-Wings fly-
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Hope this brings forth a smile Kari
Written September 25th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- words of hope and encoragment~For broken wings Fly~ by Firequeen.
300 points, ended September 29, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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and Thanks a bunch for the visit Firequeen
Appreciate Your time and Generous comment!!
Glad to see You enjoyed the verse
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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short but so very sweet
you said so much in few lines.
so very touching
good luck to you -
and Thanks a bunch for the visit Sandy
Appreciate Your time and comment as always
Glad You enjoyed this one!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Very, very nicely done! Desire, this is a sweet piece, girlie and I wish you all the best in the contest!
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and Thanks for the visit Kari
I'm Glad You Enjoyed this verse and You smiled
That is what I was hoping!!
Appreciate Your Generous comment and time!
Keep on smiling ok
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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and Thank You for the visit Lynda
Appreciate Your Generous comment and time as always!!
Glad to see You enjoyed this verse
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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and Thank You for the visit Tessa
Appreciate Your Generous comment and time!
Glad to see You enjoyed this verse for Kari!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Desire...
My darling friend what can I say about this most marvelous piece written to someone who means a great deal to me...Thank you for writing this to uplift her spirits...She is always there for us now it's our turn to be there for her...
Love you bunches
Tes
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Desire
What a beautiful dedication!
I have seen several of your dedication poems and they are always so very beautiful and personal..You have a loving heart
Lynda
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PS I love that graphic!!
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Good Luck!
aw it did bring a smile...thanks so much for your kind words...they mean a lot to me
Good luck in the contest.
Kari
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