I want passion. I want lust.
I want to know I have your trust.
I want awkward. I want tense.
I want our love to be immense.
I want meaning. I want skill.
I want feeling that could kill.
I want truth. I want affection.
I want entirely new direction.
I want jealousy. I want lies.
I want some worrisome goodbyes.
I want to push. I want to feel.
I want to know that this is real.
I want to leave. I want to stay.
I want to kiss it all away.
I want the pain. I want the tears.
I want to be okay with fears.
I want it right. I want it wrong.
I want to cuddle all day long.
I want to yell. I want to rant.
I want to hug you 'till I can't.
I want it all. I want you,
and I need you to want me too.
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Written September 25th, 2006
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God Jenn, this is gorgeous. I know its been forever since we've talked, but this just jumped out at me. This makes me feel exactly how I feel for my fiance(yes i'm getting married)....all of it. I adore it. and you know my myspace and my yahoo, so get ahold of me sometime. Anyway, hope to talk to you soon.
xxx
Chelsea
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awesome feeling...i know all to well what it feels like to want someone so much that its just undeniable. its pure agony when you can't have everything...and wanting everything means wanting the good with the bad. it really is a great poem. sorry i can't say too much on it...too many emotional tie ins for me...makes me think of an ex that i want all that from that i can't have...however i did find someone new and fingers crossed that works out for me...but as far as your poem...it was good...
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I really this. The ryheme was amazing. I didn't even notice how smooth it was until I read it aloud the second time. You must really want this person, and I think it was brave of you to put all your wants into words that the world can see. I like this a lot.
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This is a wonderful poem! A lot of wanting though, lol. This is a great poem to read because it is very cleary and it flows nicely from start to finish. Great job. All4hugs
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Can see that you really want someone. This says it all. Sentiments well expressed in these lines - easy to read and understand.
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your poem is full of lust for life...wanting it all, the good and the bad...wanting to feel
seeing as this poem rhymes i read it waiting for a bump in the rhyme and was pleased when it never came
nice job
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really good but maybe more orginal metaphors would be good,
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Wow this is reallllllllllly good!! I'm serious. I want most of these things too, I'll tell ya! I loved how you put this together and your rhyming as well. Keep it up! I hope to see more poems from you!
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i didnt even realize i put "truth" twice..thanks for the heads up! i'll have to change it.
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You did an amazing job in this piece. Although you used 'truth' twice very close to eachother. other than that, though, the whole thing incredible. Because you mentioned things that come with a relationship, like fighting. not just kissing, hugging and holding hands. I loved this piece, more than i can say.
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This is a great poem, but that is no surprise because you are a talented poet. I think this is really sweet.. I love it! keep it up!
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Jenn! You wrote something! I'm proud. This has a fast paced depth of honesty that I just love. Quite lovely. Applause. Anyway, I MISS YOU! We need to talk. Cause we don't anymore, and it makes me sad. So there.
xx
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wow, I started reading this and just couldn't stop. it's amazing. I love the flow and rhyme. everything about it is wonderful. everyone has wants and needs and sometimes we just have to let them out. lol. this is a great write. i'm applauding!!!!
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wonderful write that says it all keep up the good work
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Well my dear, I am more than sure there is a wonderful man waiting just around the bend that is quite capable of fulfilling all these "wants". YOU surely deserve the very best. I still want some of these things after 33 years of marriage. LOL
I wish you the best in getting them all. I've missed you dear heart. I hope all is well.
ONE LOVE ♥
Renee
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I love this!!!!!!!!!! I think most of us look for this in love. You did a great job on this one! Keep that pen flowing.
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Beautiful
I love this peice and how it shows not only what you want, but the need to be wanted in return. Other wise the rest is kind of pointless. -
cute
I love how your not looking for that perfect love because we all know it's not there... but for that real love which though it may be hard to find it is out there for everyone, all that's needed is the ambition to look for it. -
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AWWWWWW i love it, i think it should be on a card you give to someone, id buy it, awesome and beautiful and full of truth, great write...WRITE ON ROCK ON AND READ ON!!! -
I love this, I once wrote a kinda similar piece with the same title lol. Great job; keep up the good work.
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I thought this was written very interestingly, and I liked the passion in it.
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I like this a lot. I know that feeling of wanting intensity in your life, whether it's good or bad. Just wanting all those emotions and experiences that are raw and make you feel and grow. I don't know if that's what you were going for, but that's what I get from reading this. Very nice
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Yeah I believe that is something we all look for in love, just human need to want. Excellent work!
. Much Love 2ya
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Edited on Oct 05, 11:01 p.m. because 'to remove spam'.
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