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My keith

Loving

GuItar player

MOWS A CEMETARY

wORSHIPS HIS GRANDAUGTER, TORI

hE HAS A MAJOR GREEN THUMB

Was chased by an emu

An aweome dad

Wants to buy a music store

Give you the shirt off his back

He helps me landscape our acres

Libra is his astrology sign

Could make a plastic flower grow

Plants red roses, just for me

Loves his girls, Ronica and Dezmyn

HAS AN AWFUL TEMPER AT TIMES

Will love me to the end

Musician

Songwriter

Very private

My best friendSealed

He keeps us happy

 Twenty three years maried to me

WRITES ORIGINAL MUSIC, ABOUT HIS FAMILY, AND HIS YOUTHFULL DAYS

Author notes

THIS IS ABOUT MY HUSBAND, KEITH.
Written September 25th, 2006

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 16, 2008
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    To be this reads like a list -

    but I can easily appreciate the love you have for your husband


  • Dark Whispers
    May 26, 2007

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    sweet little poem, the backgroud is a little bright and it hurts my eyes but other than that it was a great poem


  • allfaith
    May 4, 2007
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    wow this poem is good and the backround makes it stick out


  • Alasar Minoko
    May 4, 2007
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    Very nice well written I like it best of luck.


  • x Gemini x
    February 4, 2007

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    First, let me thank you for entering my contest.

    Second:

    Creative perspective and conveyance.

    I did say no StIcKy or ALL CAPS, but i'll let this slide.


  • esroddo silver member
    December 5, 2006
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    Wonderfully expressed and written

    Wow it sounds like there should be more Keiths in the world. And this World would be a better place. And Marriages would last longer. Really enjoyed this write I am glad that you have some one so wonderful in your life. Thank you so much for entering and good luck (Lisa)


  • Poetdontknowit
    September 25, 2006
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    I THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!!!!!!!
    //////////////POETDONTKNOWIT....................


  • Avalin
    September 25, 2006
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    He sounds like a nice guy. The love you have for him is obviously very strong and the picture you paint of him is beautiful. It's great that you feel so passionate about him that it has inspired you to write this! He's a very lucky man! Much enjoyed!

    ~Avalin~

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