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Oh my heavenly dove

OH MY HEAVENLY DOVE.




ANGEL`S AFTER MIDNIGHT OFTEN

COME TO WATCH OVER US,

TAKING CARE OF OUR SOUL`s

WITHOUT ANY REAL FUSS.


GOD TOOK YOUR BODY AND

HE TURNED IT IN TO A DOVE,

FOR YOUR HEART WAS SO WARM

AND IT WAS SO FULL OF LOVE.


SO NOW WHEN WE SLEEP

AND LIVE SEEM`S NOT ENOUGH,

YOU WILL BE GUIDING US

FROM THE HEAVEN`S ABOVE.


I CAN FEEL YOU WATCHING

AND I KNOW YOU ARE THERE,

TIS A WONDERFUL COMFORT

TO KNOW YOU STILL CARE.


WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES

I CAN STILL SEE YOUR FACE,

AND YOUR BEAUTIFUL SMILE

CAN STILL LIGHT UP THE PLACE.





Written by


Carl Spencer.


25-09-2k6




IN MEMORY

of

SUE OWEN.




IN LIFE YOU WERE MY SOULMATE


AND IN DEATH YOU ARE MY GUIDING LIGHT

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IN MEMORY OF  SUE OWEN
Written September 25th, 2006

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  • Roseleaf
    November 11, 2006
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    sharing beautiful love ^*^

    this is a beautiful treasure of dedication love for Sue and bet she knows of how you write to her with so much dedication

    There's a Ancient Saying ^*^
    When a dove flaps its wings in china, The wind currents shift for thousands of miles,across mountains and seas.
    "its just a poetic way of saying"

    Everything we do , has a ripple effect and we are all inner connected and have a responsibility to look out for one another and further generations
    amen


  • carlspenc1
    October 4, 2006
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    Thankz for your kind comments


  • Lost Like Woah
    October 3, 2006
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    heartrending

    awww.. makes one want to cry and wish someone felt that way about them, excellent expression of emotion, makes me fell your loss.


  • dazed dreamer.
    September 26, 2006
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    wow! i don't think anything from me, anything i say, can do this justice! this was so heart felt! i absolutly loved it!
    'when i close my eyes
    i can still see your face'
    that was so sweet! i'm sorry for your lose, i know it's not easy. i loved this poem! it was a great write! i hope to read more from you here soon! keep writing!
    --- Brooke