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Warum Bin Ich ein Baum??

Ich bin ein Baum
In grün und braun
Ich wohne in ein park
Ich koste veile Mark
Ich sittzen jeden tag
Kannst du antworten mein Frag??

Wurdest du ein Baum sein?
Wurdest du ein Baum sein?
Wurdest du ein Baum sein?
Warum bin Ich ein Baum??

Ich bin berlaubt
Und nicht serh laut
Ich werde nie ein Stumpf sien
Bin ich abfall? ...nien!
Ich schlafe jeden tag
Kannst du antworten mein Frag??

Wurdest du ein Baum sein?
Wurdest du ein Baum sein?
Wurdest du ein Baum sein?
Warum bin Ich ein Baum??

Author notes

this is written in german... appollgeeeees for mistakes!!
It means....
I am a tree
In green and brown
I live in a park
And cost lots of money
I sit every day
Can you answer my question?

Would you like to be a tree?
Would you like to be a tree?
Would you like to be a tree?
Why am I a tree?

I am leafy
And not very loud
I'd never like to be a stump
Am I rubbish? ...no!
I sleep every day
Can you answer my question?

Would you like to be a tree?
Would you like to be a tree?
Would you like to be a tree?
Why am I a tree?


ta daaaa!!! and in german it all rhymes!! lol
Written September 25th, 2006

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  • She Stole My Voice
    October 2, 2006
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    I don't know why your a tree either, but HEY! Gut!
    Keep up the killer work and take care

    ~ImmortalUndead~


  • sommerregen
    September 29, 2006
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    Oh nice, it´s a good idea for a poem!
    I had to smile while reading it,it´s simple , but it has something special, you managed the German version well !
    Viel Glück


  • LittleAnn
    September 28, 2006
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    Sehr schön! I liked this a lot and enjoyed the German one... The 'simple' rhyming adds to the humour and yeah... that's cool!
    Best of luck in the contest and keep on writing!
    Annie


  • individuality gold member
    September 27, 2006
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    i was a little bush at one time, then i branched out and became a tree spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


  • BlooQKazoo
    September 27, 2006
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    man we're amazing!! xoxo

  • madhatter
    September 27, 2006
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    its amazing it still makes me smile, i remeber when you created the song. i hope you win the contest becauause its relly impressive!!! i love you and the song. XxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxX

  • clulesgamdgirl
    September 25, 2006
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    lol this was cute! i have no clue why you're a tree....lol. not too many errors, and this contest definitely needs more german poems best of luck hugs

    gracie

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