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Mystic Moggy

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The cards are dealt

promising to foretell a future,

in hope, a wealthy one.
Glistening eyes, amber and green
(cats eyes) as deep as her affection.

A soft humming;
a purr of contentment,

as she studies the outlook...

Will it be chicken or tuna for dinner?
Maybe accompanied
by
a saucer of milk?
Cat eyes shine.


Her gentle lick brushes her lips,
(the same lick she lays upon my hand)

as she dreams her prediction
will come true…

Mystic moggy collects her cards,
and scampers to my call -
”dinner time!”

Author notes

This is for my cats  
The image is my cat Juny with her tarot cards.
Written September 25th, 2006

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  • Christina Finlayson
    September 29, 2006
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    Lovely and well-polished (and I love cats--currently have six). Don't ever change your style! This reminds me very much of how I USED TO write until I got wrapped up in meter and rhyme and form, which can be beautiful, but also a trap that is hard to shake loose from! Always be confident with your free style; it is beautiful.

  • -df-
    September 25, 2006
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    A treat for Moggy and this reader! I predict...tuna! Thank you for this whimsical entry.
    Good lluck in the contest.

    df