We have all heard of demons and vixen.
That they are evil and not to trust them.
I guess most of us would run in fear.
But did you know that a Demon could be a vixen to.
Which are quite truly beautiful.
And their words can be so very tender and sweet.
So be careful of whom you trust.
Look into there heart.
For there is where you will find,
Out what they really are.
(c) Rose Patrick April 24, 2003
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Written April 24th, 2003
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so true... wow great job. I loved it! It was so true and well spoken! wow wow wow that is all I can say!
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Now this is a fabulous piece, background and pic awesome as well. It's so true that beauty to the eye does not mean beauty of the heart and soul. A very real warning here. Excellent job
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The Truth!
Shiver
I know all about heartless beauty.
I've begun to lose track of how many times my heart has been beneath the sole of a suposed lovers boot. Nice peice, written from the heart. -
I love the advis and the truth behind or as well write in front of the poem! I know! I have a hard time trusting people and it takes a long time before I trust anyone with anything! And that is why I am looking down into them and anyilizing everything that I have learned about them hoping to find some truth behind them! Great write! This is an awesome piece and thank you for sharing it with us! *Lady*
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wise advice
oo, very wise advice. veeeerrry wise. and generally, demons know better than to come to you in a repulsive form. that would tip you off and you'd run away and their plan be fouled! so they come in some form appealing to you.... good piece.
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This piece sounds oh-so-true. Good words of warning here in your use of imagery. All to often, we throw caution to the winds by hearing and giving in to words sung so sweet that are untrue. Thanks for the read.
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Powerful and full of truth
This bears so much truth.
It has been my experience that there are great numbers of "Demon And Vixen" in this world. It is sad to say, but it is our contact with these mislead souls that aids us in becoming the stronger individual that we all grow into. Personally I harbor alot of Resentment, but I also feed from that, I feed from my anger, and pain. Each day I learn new things about myself, and it all stems back to the title of this poem. Great write, and thank you as well for taking the time to read "Child Of 5". -
Yes I agree so many times people you trust turn out to be something else and if you are not careful they can really hurt you. Its hard soemtimes for me to be ddistrustful I find it so easy to trust people, unfortunately continue to do so in spite of so many disappointments. But i think it is people like that who are the losers ultimately because they never can keep a good friend and there hearts are so empty without a shred of sincere or true feelings.
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