I wear this plumage like the feathers of the oh so colourful birds
Hiding and enshrouding my hidden delights, as the leaves cover the bare tree bark
But can you see? My eyes and softly curved lips are inviting....begging
For you to lose your soul,remove this plumage, plummet and indulge your wildest fantasies....
Author notes
Written September 25th, 2006
A contest entry
- ~~Inspire from the picture~~~ by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended September 29, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your 100th poem by Loveandblessings2u.
975 points, ended March 16, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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A perfect piece of poetry for the contest..
This is a wonderful write,
it fits so well with the picture.
Best of luck in the conteset.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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This is a wonderful poem! I really liked what you read into the picture and the inspiration you drew from it
I think the format works wonders with this kind of poem, I really liked the tone of your words I really enjoyed this write, the ending was my favorite part - beautiful and seductive
Keep writing
Polly
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Thank you Preeti for your lovely comment and applause on my write
It is much appreciated.
Gaylene
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beautiful and sensual words u have used to give life to the picture gaylene..thanks for entering and good luck...
preeti.. -
Wow mystic thank you so much for your wonderful comments. As always I truly appreciate them my friend
Gaylene
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Beautiful job, you took this exactly where it should be. It is beautiful, wonderful flow and word usage.
It is sure Gold!!!
Love and best to you. -
Thank you so much Michelle for your wonderful comment on my write It is truly appreciated
Gaylene
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"begging For you to lose your soul,remove this plumage, plummet and indulge your wildest fantasies...." what beautiful and sensual words you use...lovely, good luck in the contest
take care
Michelle Fey
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