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You My Love


You my love, have changed me

you have opened my eyes

to something so much more

and mended my heart.

Your voice makes me weak

yet, gives me strength.

Your eyes say so much

while your lips remain still

Though we can not be,

we still find someway

to embrace the love we share

appreciate the time spent

and know that it will change

...to wait for this to change

Know that I will be here

Waiting till the end...

know my love is with you...

                  Endlessly



A.L.R.




 







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Written September 24th, 2006

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  • zzzzz gold member
    December 2, 2006

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    The Hopeful Romantic

    May your love find an appropriate vessel on this earth;
    Your children appreciate the woman of their birth...
    Your talent and emotion be appreciated by who matter
    and your Poetry and laughter make their hearts Patter!

    Forget the pitter...I go right to the heart of the matter...and you do!

    A year has not tarnished the romantic I have known, may this year's holiday be the brightest to YOU ever shone...
    Peace Dear Friend


  • Dolphin Shaktiheart
    October 18, 2006
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    This piece is very sweet and heartfelt. The one you wrote this for should feel honored.


  • Sonja
    October 8, 2006
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    I already commented this verses but I am back to leave another applause for your very nice poem. It looks like an fine art lace drops coming from your poetic pen.
    ~Sonja~


  • Sonja
    October 8, 2006
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    I already commented this verses but I am back to leave another applause for your very nice poem. It looks like an fine art lace drops coming from your poetic pen.
    ~Sonja~


  • Frozentearz
    September 26, 2006
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    A great poem of expressing your love and gratitude to someone
    who has touched your life,
    Always a wonderful thing when you can put it into words,
    warm hugz your way
    Frozentearz


  • Vernal Bloom
    September 25, 2006
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    Afarin

    Dear Amy, what a lovely lyric you have composed.. it was written in Love category but I could feel a special pain within your poem. Surely the power of love helps you write that beautiful. If there weren’t your pure love, I wouldn’t feel special after reading that. In short: it was HONEST, SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL. Girl, you made the words dance in front of readers’ eyes. I wish I could express myself better.
    Thanks for sharing this delightful poem with us and best luck for the contest :-)

    ~Massy~
    P.S. the background was amazing!


  • Sonja
    September 25, 2006
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    My dear Amy, I am glad to see you are back with your verses, full of deep love within a line writen like a great music. Like a composer you make it the best way, leaving us to wish and to ask for much more. Bravo!
    ~Sonja~


  • Fairy Moon
    September 25, 2006
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    AWESOME

    This is so sweet. There is a few spelling mistakes, but that's okay. I see the passion you have for this person. I feel it deeply. Makes me think of my love. That is what you want your readers to do. So bravo! Keep writing and sharing it with us here on allpoetry. Hold on ight to this person and dont ever let them go..... ~~Shannon~~

  • mssonah
    September 25, 2006
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    so sweet and beautiful! I love it keep up the good work
    --------mssonah


  • soulfultia gold member
    September 24, 2006
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    Good write

    A lovely write... please check your spelling, "appreciate", I often have to run back over my work too Hey we all do! Anyway, nice flow and message, enjoyed the read, Love is in the air!! Keep up the good work, ~Tia


  • ChaoLuv
    September 24, 2006
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    pretty

    This made me feel like I havent felt in a while and even though love has not been kind to me I understand. This is really sweet and yes whoever this was written for is REALLY LUCKY.


  • MYownFreedom
    September 24, 2006
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    I am sorry you have not had such words spoken to you... But every word i say is true.. To have such a connection with another is an awesome experience.. something new to me as well.. there is just such an unspoken connection that has been there from the day we met... something that is hard to explain... and dont even have to be explained between the two of us... so much can be said without saying any words.. Thank you for commenting on my work, it is much appriciated Amy


  • JohnWaynePalsy
    September 24, 2006
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    nice

    i hate you for lying liar!!!!!and i hate who ever you wrote this for or to.nobody really feels this way even though they may speak such words in hopes of getting someone to believe.why dont nobody say such things to me???
    that was meant to be taken humorously though i find it quite true.nice poem

  • MYownFreedom
    September 24, 2006
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    Thank you for your warm wishes... glad you enjoyed it Amy


  • Kari gold member
    September 24, 2006
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    sweet

    awww this was such a sweet write. I loved it. You have done a wonderful job and the best of luck in the contest.

    Kari

  • MYownFreedom
    September 24, 2006
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    Thank you so very much for your warm comment.. Glad you enjoyed my write.. Amy


  • Akarian silver member
    September 24, 2006
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    Excellent

    wow. Thats beautiful. An amazingly good write.


  • angelgirl
    September 24, 2006
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    wOW YOUR WORD'S OF LOVE ARE SO TRUE AND VERY WELL PUT,i HOPE WHO EVER YOU WROTE THIS FOR IS VERY LUCKY INDEED TO HAVE YOUR LOVE.......GOD BLESS ANGELGIRL

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