I can't hide no longer
These feelings are no longer stained
My feelings are all torn out
I have no heart
I have no soul
All I have is myself
That no one can see
But me
I have nothing to say
But Bye
Because this beautiful heart
Was meant to die
Author notes
Written September 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- Poems of Death by Faerie.Princess.
300 points, ended September 28, 2006, 54 entries
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Wow I really like this poem.
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very smiple, but very imaginative, and very inspirational
{SaD BoY In BlacK}<3 -
Ok this is a good poem but you need to fix something in it.
This feelings are no longer stained
This should be These.
Other then that good job and good luck in the contest. -
i like this poem. its simple but beautiful. i like the ending, it was well written. but no-ones heart should die. great poem. good luck in the contest and keep writing
Thankyou For Entering -
Well, this is a good piece of work. But do you really think that a beautiful heart should die? This world needs all the beauty it can get, and no one is ever alone.
I myself am not a Christian, but I still believe that no one deserves to be alone. You need to be able to talk to someone about anything. I have this many times, a friend or a parent or even a sibling can be your only connection to life. Sometimes you feel alone, especially in big crowds. It's ok.
Please, darling, if you ever need someone to hear your rants or let you vent, DO NOT HESITATE to IM me. If I can help, I will. From where this is an internet thing, I can't really comfort you, but I can offer advice and let you know that someone out here cares.
Much love, as always,
Bubbles -
Its good.
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