Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

For the Record, Her Diary VII

She can't stop herself from
dancing-
out under the moon
on a clear, crisp night
{oh the stars are falling all around}
Her happiness astounds everyone and
her smile
hasn't gone away yet.
Laughter rings out in the meadow

as the emotions start to fly
{oh just like the sparrows, the freebirds}



He's standing on the side again
-but with a new face-
a new heart-
and new, kinder intentions
{such love}



She collapses in his arms
out of breath,
and lets him kiss her.



Author notes

to my Daniel. lovelovelove

written in english because koloski is boring
Written September 24th, 2006

In a list

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • On-A-Whim
    October 1, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    thank you duckie i hope you did well at your audition... i know you already had it so i can't really say good luck lol


  • VioletTears
    September 30, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    This has a beautiful, free and romantic flow to it. It made me smile. I like your images and your last stanza was a wonderful closure.