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I'm Sorry But....

I'm sorry but I slept with your sister


I'm sorry but I slept with your sister and with your best friend at the same time.


I'm sorry but I slept with your sister and with your best friend at the same time while your mother was watching


I'm sorry but I slept with your sister and with your best friend at the same time while your mother was watching while I was screaming your name


I'm sorry but I slept with your sister and with your best friend at the same time while your mother was watching while I was screaming your name as I was busting my load all over your bed


I'm sorry but I slept with your sister and with your best friend at the same time while your mother was watching while I was screaming your name as I was busting my load all over your bed while you were at work


What can I say....I'm sorry


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Written September 24th, 2006

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    June 16

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    hahahahhahah!


    now this is really really nasty!

    you, sneaky sneaky...

    if you did that to me, gah! the things that are going on in my mind if u did!

    Thanks for the wonderful laugh and poem!


  • Aimee Hill
    October 21, 2006
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    LOL!! You really get around..eh?! I loved this.. I liked how you kept repeating the lines and adding just a bit more each time. This was a great laugh for 9 am on a Saturday morning. Ha.. Thanks for sharing with us.


  • Sarah957
    September 24, 2006
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    This is crazy! I dunno, will she take the hint? After all, it was HER name you were screaming!


  • intanglio2ring
    September 24, 2006
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    Dear rummery78,
    OH! This one is Bad! Bad! Bad! - And I loved it!
    Kept on getting deeper and deeper into your lover's turf. This would be one way to definitely get 'er done!
    Thanks for a wonderful entry!
    Good Luck in my contest!
    Tang

  • HiddenDesire
    September 24, 2006
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    I love the build. It made me giggle. Thanks for making me smile!!

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