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Charade

The heavens' gates are hidden in the blue,

most tender in the beaming face of sun.

But sky in subtle ways has mimics too

and brilliant will her grief let teardrops run.


It is their name which first I seek to find:

fertility that glistens, spraying streams,

bringing relief to earth's dry desert mind.

When heat returns, it leaves in secret steams.


My second must be made with wood and skill,

young hazel, forced to bend by craftmen's hand.

Captured in the grip of Cupid's will,

it sends an arrow flying over land.


Of arches, plump or handsome, one can say

they are a frame to views and many scenes.

Unite my two to one word, as you may

and find a length of colours, blues to greens.


While others just remain or break away,

standing clearly there for every eye,

the arch I seek can fade away or stay.

It shows its lustre, sometimes, by the bye. 

Author notes

A word riddle in the way of old English parlour games. This is an easy one.
Written September 24th, 2006, last edited May 2008

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  • Emmanuel Cant
    November 20, 2006
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    Pretty

    Pretty, now, she is, she is...by the seven gods...you be speakin' of the rainbow, I'll warrent!! very, very pretty, yes, very PRETTTY


  • heygoo
    October 15, 2006
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    This is a delightful piece. How talented to have penned such a lovely poem and hidden within it a secret. Is it by chance a rainbow?


  • Mary the Cat
    September 24, 2006
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    Aren't most poems supposed to seem easy and flowing? But I suppose you know how difficult it is to create one like that...Thanks for the kind words on my piece. Call it a love poem if you like it...Lily


  • Mary the Cat
    September 24, 2006
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    Thank you very much! I'm glad you like my newest... Lily


  • Mary the Cat
    September 24, 2006
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    I'm afraid "arrow" isn't quite right, but maybe have another go! Thanks for the praise! Lily

  • Joseph Gregory
    September 24, 2006
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    challenging riddle-need more time
    intelligent,beautiful poem. like it very much


  • Poetdontknowit
    September 24, 2006
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    SWEET

    I'VE TRIED AND TRIED WITH THIS ONE. I HAVE SEVERAL GUESSES, MAYBE A RAINBOW, OR JUST A BOW, FOR AN ARROW. I DON'T KNOW , YOU TELL ME NOW.LOL I LOVE THE POEM, VERY WELL WRITEN, WITH EXCELLENT VOCABULARY AND IMAGINATION.


  • September 24, 2006
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    Very good write. Sunshinze


  • poemtate
    September 24, 2006
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    wonderful poem
    I love nature as much as love it self
    if not for the dying of the leaves
    I wouldn't know what it could be minus perfection in nature


  • Sacred Ground
    September 24, 2006
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    I don't know the answer to the riddle, but this is a great piece. Very enjoyable.


  • Dazzling Darkness
    September 24, 2006
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    i dont get the riddle
    but still agreat poem


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 24, 2006
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    Superb/Fun/Intriguing/Unique

    Not awake enough to figure out a riddle, but the word "arrow", came to mind while reading this, so thats my contribution to a solution. Very well written
    Edited on Sep 24, 7:45 because 'corrected spelling'.


  • paullallady silver member
    September 24, 2006
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    good

    I am absolutely terrible at riddles. so even after rereading it, I just decided to sit back and enjoy this poem for what it
    is, which is wonderful. good job.

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