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Lady Braveheart

LADY BRAVEHEART


She believed in her king and her country
she loved the land in which she was born
ne'er say a word against either
for you'll feel the wrath of her scorn


She always knew that when she got older
she'd someday fight to keep her land free
and lay her life on the line for her king
fighting to the death, if it need be


She never gave much thought to marriage
Nay, she was not one for frills and lace
and ne'er tell her that she's just a girl
at least, dare not say that to her face


When other girls her age had children
she was glad, not to have made that her life
for to be stuck in a house, day after day
t'was not her desire to be any man's wife


Young maidens would walk through the market
fondling linens and other such wares
but her thoughts were on a good sword of steel
and crusades throughout the lands, far and near


Now it came to pass, that a war was brewing
an invasion was about to take place
the king was readying for a battle
to save country and save his land's grace


How she pondered o'er this, many a night
wondering how she could join the crusade
surely they'd not allow a girl to fight
Though she was not some mere, helpless young maid


For she came from a large family of boys
Aye, t'was eleven brothers she had in all
they had taught her how to take a tumble
and they taught her how to take a fall


It came to pass, time was growing nigh
The crusade was on the move with speed
all the young men, from her village joined in
and the call, she just knew she must heed


She took bits of clothing from her brothers
a pair of trousers, from another, a vest
and a pair of sturdy boots from the youngest
soon she'd be ready to join with the rest


Just a few more tasks, then she'd be done
Next, chopping off her long, golden curls
she then grabbed her own sword and leather scabbard
Now who'd dare think that she was a girl?


Lastly, retrieving a steel helmet and shield
that she had hidden, far under her bed
for she was certain this day would eventually near
and she'd be ready without fear nor dread


She filed in line with the others
hoping to fit in with the rest of the pack
as they walked and rode out to the battle field
without regret, she ne'er once looked back


The battle was fierce, beyond her dreams
but she would die if that was the cost
for no one had the right to take their land
her anger boiled, she not give in to a loss 


She ran full force at the enemy
clutching her sword with every ounce of her might
as she ran it into a shoulder
pulling it out, she continued to fight


Then she put it through another enemy's heart
knowing he would have done the same
so she felt no guilt, or slightest remorse
the battle field was no place to feel shame


She saw her own comrades dying that day
which made her anger grow stronger and firm
Aye, she'd make these devilish heathens pay
for their arrogance, they soon would squirm


She took many lives, by the time night fell
And by the grace of God, she still stood
even though the cost to their own was dear
they did well, as well as they could


The battle lasted a few more days
As they tired, but they still stood strong
Her pride and love for her country and king
kept her steady, as the days grew long


But soon their numbers were dwindling
the enemy retreating, their scheme falling apart
She had fought her first battle with honor and pride
The young heroine, Lady Braveheart.


~PennyLynne~

Author notes

Someone mentioned in a comment on one of my poems, something about lady heroines...so I took that as a challenge LOL  So here it is...and yes, it's another long one LOL  I hope it's enjoyable to all.... thanx for reading
Written September 24th, 2006

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  • Ladybug
    November 30, 2007
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    Bravo

    wow, it is exceptional to say the least. you have quite the spirit for a story teller in poet form. It held my attention throughout the ending. I say a movie that is similar to this story, I believe it was written and directed by Barbara Streisand. You need to keep your pen more active for you are too good to let it lie free.
    keep that pen busy till it runs out of ink for your talent is far too good to go un-noticed.

    Tamara


  • Ladybug
    December 13, 2006

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    wow,this is breath taking to say the least
    gosh knows i am too femine for this part but I am proud of this person that can do this act.
    a great write you give the audience Penny

    Tamara

  • Elyse
    December 11, 2006

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    excellent!

    I read this a few times before, but at last I will leave a comment (although I swore never to type any comment on AP anymore! LOL) Penny, I think this is a great poem, it proves that you still have your skills as a poetess, and I would love to read more new work by your hand! Please continue to write, you can do it! I tremendously liked reading this wonderful tale of heroism and woman power. Absolutely a most excellent poem! Well done! You're the best! :-)


  • TanyaB
    November 28, 2006
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    Wow that was tons of run to read, I kept thinking "you go girl!" I always enjoy your poetic stories, they capture the readers and take them along on a thrilling journey. Nice to read your work again, Penny.


  • Roseleaf
    November 11, 2006
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    ^*^

    Beautifully done and enjoyed the jounrey with Lady Braveheart and glad you took note of the comment made and bought this amazing tale to share with us
    Bravo and thanks for sharing

    Love *Light*Peace
    Pauline


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 1, 2006
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    Penny, this is a wonderfully done piece! I really enjoyed the view of a female heroine. It is not often you get to read this sort of thing anymore and you've really done it superbly. I'm so sorry I've not gotten over to read this sooner. Bravo! I see you've not lost your touch while away Blessings and Hugs, Gypsy


  • catz Moderators member
    October 5, 2006
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    Wow, this is awesome, Penny. You've written a story filled with love of country and loyalty. Your Lady Braveheart is truly to be admired for her determination and bravery. You've done her justice in this powerful piece.

    The rhyme and rhtymn, the flow, the verbage... all very good

    Love and
    Dee


  • Rubee
    October 2, 2006
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    Thank you for the suggestion Sgt B


  • Sgt B
    October 2, 2006
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    A trye Lady Godiva story. Good write I did enjoy it thanx for the nudge to read it. Im sorry I missed it earlier.


  • Barbara gold member
    September 25, 2006
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    Ow, yeah! Wonderful, just wonderful. Oddly enough, I'm in an 'ancient' mood lately, having read "Stonehenge" and "The Winter King" (both by Bernard Cornwell), and this poem reminds me of them. (Both are over 500 pages, and I read both in a week )

    Your wording is wonderful, exciting and both eloquent and elegant as it weaves though the battle.

    Excellent and well done.


  • AngelEyes323
    September 24, 2006
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    eXcellent!!!

    What a wonderful and creative story! A great movie could come out of this

    I agree that this easily maintains interest, regardless of the length. Your wording and format are excellent. Your talent is endless and appreciated

    ~Kathy




  • individuality gold member
    September 24, 2006
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    a good piece of poetry which you have written here, a nice rhythm to the poem, the flow is very nice. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...

  • strangerforeigner
    September 24, 2006
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    well done!

  • Rof Cau
    September 24, 2006
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    I loved it Rubes. Hadn't been to yours for such a long time and clearly I have missed a lot.

    this reminds me of Coleridge, the only thing being that a few lines here and there does break the rhythm, but on the whole you carried it well throughout.

    An excellent skilled narrative.


  • October.
    September 24, 2006
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    This is awesome. GIRLS RULE, especially when it comes to doing something a boy is "supposed" to do. I really enjoyed this. Great write.


  • September 24, 2006
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    sigh... yay...

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