I Imagination
I can run like a wolf.
I can swim like a dolphin.
I can fight like a bear.
And I am brave like the lion!
Reality
I can run like a cheetah with one
broken leg.
I can swim like a small fish.
I am a lover not a fighter.
And as scared as the mouse.
Author notes
Written September 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- For Children 12 And Younger: KIDS TALK TOUGH! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended September 27, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - one for the children! by honey bear.
450 points, ended January 21, 2007, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy Poems of all sorts by kids to age 13 by Periwinkle Blue.
550 points, ended January 4, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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HA!! I love this poem that is funny and cute and really quite marvelous, actually.
You, fine poet, are indeed a poet. 
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very good
thank you for sharing this fun write with us,very good work ,i enjoyed this very much,keep up the good work and thank you for entering. good luck in the contest with this fun write
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Hey, Angelo, this is a very funny and well-thought-out poem! I'm proud of you!
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This is one fine poem and I am so glad I came by to read it because oh my gosh, it is so clever! You are doing some really good things, here!
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Exciting
This is very good and made me laug
Imagination is so much more fun, isn't it
BTW "And I em brave like the lion!" I think you meant "am" (not em) also in the line "I ~am~ a lover not a fighter." You are a very creative person, both your imagination and your real self
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This is great Angelo. You fantasize well, little brother. Thanks a lot for entering. Good luck to you.
Brian
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