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Love is Undefineable

Love is Undefinable,


Though many people try.


It is something that you Feel,


Both in your Heart and in your mind.


"Love is never having to say 'I'm sorry,'"


Well, I'm sorry, that's not true,


Because Love is Having to apologize,


For all the little things you do.


Though it is something I've not experienced,


I feel these words are True,


Because Love is Undefinable.


So what is it to You?


Author notes

sometimes sitting in the bath tub can get you to think. this is the result.

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Written September 23rd, 2006

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  • pandascare
    February 7, 2007

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    aw this poem is short but it gets right to the point without directly saying it
    It leaves me thinking and to me thats a really sucessful write
    great job :]

  • sylva MD poetry
    October 2, 2006
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    loving

    nice young budding poem,
    love is love!


  • Necromantic Snow
    September 24, 2006
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    Wow, I like this. It's really good!

    The rhyming adds emphasis to the poem and doesn't take away from the meaning. Excellent.

    Very, very nice^^