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Trillium




Ah, but the roses grow everywhere


out on Meadow Point in Lamoine


the gardeners from the rich homes on Mt Desert


cut them and threw them in the ocean


and they took over the shore here


where the local people live



They are beautiful and smell wonderful


and we all love them


but my daughter and I suffer through the brush


scratched and mosquito bitten


hoping to find a Trillium


that is small, plain and smells awful


and we are ten times more excited when we find one


because it is rare and exotic


and we had to work to get to see it



Anyone can appreciate outworn beauty


and claim it as their vision


but only true souls look beyond


the sights and smells and locations


of the superficial sense appeal


to appreciate the ones that grow


in the dark, hidden places


look plain, smell funny


and are exquisite in their uniqueness




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If you have to ask.... just send money.
Written September 23rd, 2006

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  • Cinnarry gold member
    September 30, 2007

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    "to appreciate the ones that grow
    in the dark, hidden places
    look plain, smell funny
    and are exquisite in their uniqueness"


    finding a flower my ass...


  • Firequeen
    September 27, 2006
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    very nice ty for your entry
    good luck to you


  • QueenOfIcedDarkness
    September 26, 2006
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    Roaring applause and standing ovations!!

    YAY!! Oh bravo to this piece indeed! What we work for is so much more rewarding. It is unique and out of the ordinary..well done my friend!

    Blue~


  • Kari gold member
    September 25, 2006
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    Thanks for the write It was good...I appreciate it.Good luck in the contest.

    Kari


  • PerVirtuous
    September 24, 2006
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    OK, Head and Looney, you win. I changed it to awful. I hope you are happy! Ha ha ha. This is the first time anyone has ever gotten me to change anything. (It's also the first time they've asked)

  • PerVirtuous
    September 24, 2006
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    Ha ha ha, Looney! You put your nose next to one! They are also called 'Stinking Benjamins'. They smell BAD! Why doesn't anybody trust me on this?


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    September 24, 2006
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    That's absolutely beautiful my pervy! I love the sentiment, though, I agree with the above comment regarding "bad" try...acerbic, or bitter, neither of which is necessarily "bad"
    but definitely not sweet.

    That is small, plain and smells bitter

    look plain, smell bitter

    That works....but if you like bad better that's kewl!
    MMuuaaahhh!!!!
    DK

  • Lullabyhaven
    September 23, 2006
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    Very Original

    This is a visionary poem and I appreciate it as such. You laid]
    this one out for sure. Write on, right on!


  • PerVirtuous
    September 23, 2006
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    Hey! What is, is. I don't second-guess God. What's the point in that?


  • HekatesMinion
    September 23, 2006
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    I thought that this was an awesome write, though smelling bad might not be the best thing to add, lol. Aside from that, I loved it.

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