A life full of pain, a life full of hurt
A place where people stomp your heart into the dirt
A life I want to make brand new
But no ones been there to see me through
Except for you Teddy..
I've loved you since the first look
That first glance from you, made me shiver
When you first touched me, my body shook
Now we're here on this road of happiness, together
I hope this love between us will last forever
Some people say that we won't last
They just don't understand, how love grew so fast
I wish you were here now, but you're not
But you're always in my heart and that will never stop
When I'm sad or upset, your always there for me
You hold me close and let me cry on your chest
I love how much you love me and how you always know me best
Being in love is such a strange thing
But life got better when you gave me this ring
Now here is something I want you to know
I love you today, more than yesterday
And I'll love you tomorrow more than today
I love you baby and I want you to know that I'm here to stay
What did you think
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wow this is really good i like it alot the part i liked the most was "I love you today, more than yesterday
and I'll love you tomorrow more than today"
i feel the same way about the one i love, nice job.
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Wow that is such a good poem. I understand how you feel in it, love can be a strange thing, but when it's true and your happy you will keep it that way. I hope you and your man stay together a long time
And keep up the great writing! Also, thank you very much for commenting my poem, it felt good to hear that ya liked it -Bella
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awww how sweet!
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moving
nice style and flow one of the best ive read in a long time thanks
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