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dreams intermingle
souls in the hollows of hands
spill shaded secrets
myra
23 April, 2003
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Written April 23rd, 2003
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Great imagery. I love this too!!! short but sweet
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Secrets whispered in the dark of night dance through my head. Love held in the palm of your hand. What wonderful and expressive feelings invoked in the heart.
~Michelle~
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Excellent! LOVIN' IT!!!!!!!
Haiku at it's finest. I find this to be a very difficult style which is why it intrigues me so. You nailed this one, Remakable
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In three short lines lay an essay of words. Fascinatingly well spoken, in three short but incredibly long lines.
~~whims
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Beautiful
Dearest Myra,
This is so very gracefull and beautiful. To write with such grace is to write with the soul, with the words the heart speaks. This is so very beautiful! Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with me, and thank you for your lovely comment on my piece "Dream One"
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Short, but powerful. Good job, I'm terrible at writing short poems. Nice poem.
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I find it remarkable
that just three lines can speak
as deeply as these do.
just remarkable.
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Myra i really love this...Really beautiful..
love the meaning of these 2 lines:
"souls in the hollows of hands
spill shaded secrets "
Wael
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you have such a way of writing so much in so lil words, i have been around for a while, and i feel like a bummy friend sice i havent come to see how youve been, anyway i love this, another deep thoughtfull write
~broken Reflections -
Thank you Gill, Jacqueline, Sherry, Mike, Pat, Danna, LilMissMuffet, Debbie and Wendy - what a privilege to be read by sincere poetic friends. I really appreciate your comments.
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Oooo... that 2nd line is remarkable :-)
Wow, this is lovely, what more can i say... nice stuff !
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i don't think two souls can get any closer than this!
so deeply romantic............
i love the line "hand me a secret"
thanks Myra
deb
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there can be no secrets between two souls in love
this is beautiful Myra, you always amaze me with your words
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souls in the hollows of hands... sometimes we can convey so much more with a simple touch, more than words could ever express. Love this, Myra.
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Simply lovely Myra...
(((HUGS)))
Pat
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I grew images of the art work of Kalil Gibran. You go see his work Myra and you'll see that I'm talking about.
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Lovely Write
Ps Line one ment to me how dreams can come together.
Line two ment like the sharing and unity of another.
and the last one ment like trusting in those things.
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Beautiful Myra shows trust in that sharing and a love of unity Hugs dear friend, Sherry
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Myra I liked the image this painted.. it made me smile a little.. could see two old dears sat drinking coffee and whispering about the woman at the next table
well.. it's late here and my head is elsewhere..LOLOLOL
~GILL~xx
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