Each day he stings
Your tortured heart
His words pierce thru'
You like a dart
He thinks you love
With blinded eyes
Not seeing faults
Under his guise
So self absorbed
Selfish and crude
Scorching remarks
When suits his mood
He thinks he's got
Worse overall
Not noticing
Your hurt at all
But you still love
Hundred percent
Altho' your patience
Should have been spent
It pains me so
To see you weep
Remarks from him
Slicing you deep
On desperate knee
I beg Him for
Your sanity
I do implore
Onto His hand
I pray you'll cling
And unto Him
Your heart will bring
I know He'll wipe
Away your tears
Comfort your soul
Despite your fears
And so for you
I know He'll do this
He has never failed
In one small promise
Author notes
option 3.
Written September 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Mistieyedreamer- Options by FollowingFate.
600 points, ended October 3, 2006, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sob
sad sad...
i am soo your biggest fan~~ your short lines~ powerful impact~ darn...
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hey. didn't get to read this all, i'm going to miss my show. sorry. I'll read it later, but yeah, it's fine to have a sad poem.
~jess
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