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Smiling Face

I’m always the one feeling blue
It felt like no one else had a single clue
But you could
You could always tell
How I was feeling
I tried so hard to hide and hold back the tears
Before I even spoke
You would pull me in close
Assuring me that everything was going to be alright
I’m sorry that’ll take some time
For these broken wings of mine
To eventually learn how to fly

I want to let you know that I love you
And I don’t want to ever miss your smiling face
Yearning to stay forever
Here within your embrace
Even if we are far apart
I’ll be waiting
Because you’re the only that can reach the depths of my heart

These bitter sweet moments we shared
Felt like they have lasted for so long
So I wrote this song
To express that I don’t know what I would do
What would I do
If you weren’t around
Because you’re the only one who turns my frown upside down

I want to let you know that I love you
And I don’t want to ever miss your smiling face
Yearning to stay forever
Here within your embrace
Even if we are far apart
I’ll be waiting
Because you’re the only that can reach the depths of my heart

When there’s something always going wrong
I felt too weak to keep going on
You would smile
Simply tell me to follow
And take my hand and pulled me along
Thinking maybe you and I belong
Together this way
Always by each other side

I want to let you know that I love you
And I don’t want to ever miss your smiling face
Yearning to stay forever
Here within your embrace
Even if we are far apart
I’ll be waiting
Because you’re the only that can reach the depths of my heart

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Written September 22nd, 2006

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  • October 26, 2006
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    nice

    its allright


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    September 26, 2006
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    wonderful poem

    Very beautiful writing indeed. And your love shines throught this piece.


  • An Eclipse Moon
    September 22, 2006
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    Thank you. ^_^


  • Firequeen
    September 22, 2006
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    Such a beautiful write you have penned here.
    so touching
    a wonderful tribute to our sweet kari.
    ty for the entry and good luck to you.
    Firequeen