Fresh blood drips down
from the claw marks on your back
Out of your mouth come the most animistic sounds
Twin eyes sparkle an unknown shine
You scare me but I like it
So we continue this Rhyme
Your body and mine Go through the stanzas
Step by step we continue to repeat
Bite marks and fight marks over the both of us
As we follow the recipe between the sheets
Lights out no peeks into Each others Identity
This is the way i like it full of mystery
Heightened pleasure by unknown sources
Continues to write our future our history
Call it what you will
But I call it Chemistry
Animal on Animal, Sexual mystery
~AnimalisticAngel~
~~RLS~~
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Written September 22nd, 2006
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wow this is very impressive. its bare sexual urge in a poetic form. i loved all of this, especially the way you wrote like you were writin and poem and the last line definitly makes this poem what it is and the rhyme works very well! Well done!
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Aww Well thank you very much this perticular cataglory is my specialty in poetry as well as writing.
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A wonderful piece, Angel. I can see that Tang will have his work cut out for him on deciding. lol I am only here to egg him on. lol Good luck in the contest.
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AHhhh I forgot to put the name LOL sorry but yea glad you like it. good luck with your contest.
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Dear BrokenAngel24,
I was worried with the start of blood - but was intrigued and continued on into this very seductive poem.
Thanks for a great entry & Good Luck in the contest!
Tang
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