My pad and my pen,
my thoughts to mend
From the world I hide,
in this chamber inside
I can't adapt to the light,
I only live in the night
when it's dark, all is calm,
in my safe inner- realm
let me be alone in here,
outside the walls is my fear
deep in trance, not a sigh,
I'll write my words,'til I die
Author notes
#3.... It is a somewhat suicidal poem, though it's not spelled out...
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Write 'till you die...
I share your sentiment... I will write until I die. None is as good a confessor as your faithful pad and pen....
Keep writing...
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I loved it! I love the flow and the Emotion in it!!! great job!
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I can see what you mean, it more hints the topic than actually tells you about it... When we strub our pain like in that song, we just pen our pain... I do that a lot. I can grasp sadness and I suppose life is our asylumn and I guess sometimes poetry and or other hobbies are our therapists or our tabs... So yeah, they help us to feel better.
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simply yet you expressed so many feeling and i loved this thank you for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck!!! keep up the good work!!
~tearstaindangel~
BTW you need to place your option# in the authors notes or you'll be disqualified and i hate doing that so please go and fix it before my contest ends! -
Very powerful
Wow, this poem evokes all sorts of emotions in me and makes me curious about you the poet. I read your biography before coming back to read this poem, as I am interested to know more about you and why you feel safer in the dark and why you have so much pent up anger? Poetry is an excellent way to express one's inner feelings, a way to vent your anger. I sincerely want to be your friend, so if you ever need to vent to somebody, I'm here for you. Love, hugs and sunny smiles.
PS thank you so much for your comments on my poem "Autumn Dreams" I am a lover of nature, and it is to nature that I go, when I need peace, tranquility and a place to find myself. -
i wish i can write something like this.
i find this poem very interesting...
well penned
thank you for sharing
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