Lost in a moment of Stillness
Lost in a moment of thoughts
Fallen in to your arms
Nobody can touch us now
Higher than the sky
Higher than the clouds
Higher than everyone
No one can reach us now
We said
We would be together forever
We spoke sweet words of our love
And that’s what gets me through
When all I want is to be with you
By your side
In your arms
That is what gets me through
These sluggish days without you
And the nights I lie in my lonely bed
As I am Lost
In a moment of Stillness
In a moment of Silence
As a movie of you
Plays behind my eyelids
If I can’t see you I know
I still have you in my mind
If I can’t spend this moment with you
I still know somewhere out there
You will be thinking of me
And another day will come
Where I can see your smiling face
And get lost in your eyes
And all will be okay again
Author notes
yup I am back..this poem is sappy i don't care i haven't seen my special someone in 2 weeks *pout* . but yeah. any constructive criticism.
Written September 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- Not Another Title Contest! by Celticjedi.
300 points, ended September 23, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I love it very good
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aww, this is soo sweet
and i loved how you described the depth of your love...how "If I can’t see you I know
I still have you in my mind" and
"When all I want is to be with you
By your side
In your arms"
I though these lines were amazing...
this poem was very well written x~Ree~x
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aww... it's beautiful. I completely got caught up in the feelings of this post. Just gorgeous.
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Aw come on...sappy is hardly the word I would use to describe this poem. I think it's very well written and beautiful! My favorite lines were:
"As a movie of you
Plays behind my eyelids"
I loved the description in those lines! Keep up the awesome work! Thanks a lot for entering and may the Goddess be with you!
Love you
Cj
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