I thought we had it all a family that we shared,
But slowly you came distant, started not to care
I wanted to understand why you were pulling away,
I thought we shared it all, till that very day.
Your moods started changing,your temper rose high,
I came home from work one day, your car was in the drive.
As I approached the door, My key in my hand.
I could hear another voice, A voice of a man.
My body started to shake as I opened the door,
I could not believe, you and him were on the floor
You were in his arms, Loving this man.
How could I not of known, I dont understand.
I could not speak , only scream
each time I close my eyes, it keeps playing what I had seen
I wanted to run away for your betrayal killed my heart,
I thought we had something special, right from the start.
I guess I was wrong, for you love another man
In my heart I will never forgive you, or ever understand...
WHY.....
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A contest entry
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Wow, now deception kills...
Great write [=
Thanks for entering sweetie [=
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This is beautifully written and so powered with emotions. I love it.
[great.job&thanks.for.entering!]
x.
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ohh harsh!! that would bite, this was a good write tho, it really came from you.
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Very nice job.
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such a hard way to find out that your partner was bisexual... i believe that people should be upfront about these things right fron the start... i am sorry for your pain. its evident in your write... very emotional piece... good luck in your contests...
cheers
Jen
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awwwwww *tear*
this made me cry.
its beautiful dollie.
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Wow another powerful write by you. This must be a hard thing to take. Fantastic flow to a heartbreaking read.
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