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Untitled becuase yeah i fdeelliek it

I met a man once whle I was walking into a small country store on my way to Tinyfeet,Arizona, he was tall and with his skin so tan his blonde hair just illuminated of his head, his gorgoues blue eyes shone like the day sky and his storeng sturdy self made him seem irresistable. He couldn't have been past 21 years of age and yet when I looked at him I knew he was a man. I kept thinking about how I had fallen in love once when I was 17 with a guy who was 21 years old. But his memory had started to ffade within the last 3 years and I certainly did not intend to fall flat on my face for love anytime soon,But this man's aura wascalling me.


I felt his eyes on me as I searched for a pack of gum and some batteries in the store, I made msyelf ignore him. What could I do, after I left Tinyfeet I would leave and go back to New york to keep on writing so "Hello" magazine, and never come back here.





Ok I'm done this is the begging of my story for english class that will be edited by tommorow


NOT DONE

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Written September 21st, 2006

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  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    October 3, 2006
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    Ooooooo Princess this is going to be real good...I can't wait for the next part...I quite fancy him myself lol but alas he is yours so I can't steel him from you...

    I adore your mind

    Love ~mum~

    PS. I hope you turn around and look at him


  • Sorrows Redemption
    September 21, 2006
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    lol so far so good