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Riddle me this

Question:
What's yours is mine
I want to hold it
To cradle it
To protect it

What's mine is yours
I want you to have it
To keep it
To shelter it

Answer:
Hearts exchanged in passion
Received in ecstasy
Protected in love

Author notes

Okay so maybe I really like this one
Written September 21st, 2006

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  • Dyslexia
    September 18, 2007

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    hahaha when did you write this one and how did i miss it? well it's a good thing you really liked him seeing has how you are going to marry him in a few months! love ya sis.

  • hose30
    September 21, 2006
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    I like the way you put in the saying what yours is mine.I thought you put your heart into this. I understood it. good job. Can you give me feedback on my poem I can stand.