Liquid flows down the vertical tunnel,
As aqueous personified pain
Hands grip throat,
As flesh inside rots away
Acid eating
Forming tiny holes
–(- tiny incisions filled with microscopic madness -)-
Sulphuric burns
Searing lungs,
Organs collapsing in upon themselves
As I fail to be
This misanthropic majesty..
Drink Bleach And Die.
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Unfinished, inspired in Biology practical this morning. Please give CONSTRUCTIVE crititsm..
Written September 21st, 2006
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Awesome
I love this it's really good ^__^
Nice imagery etc =]
Oh and by the way...
COMMENT WHORE. =]
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ok, well i don't have any critism for you, because i love this! ^_^ ... isn't biology fun? it makes you ponder things that seem morbid to some, but it's great for ideas .. that's all i did in bio lol. keep it up,
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