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No one cares

Stop being a pity
no one cuddles you anymore
Stop speaking
no one hears you anymore

What are you
but the faintest
joke upon our lips
that we could never love you

So stop
No one cares.

Author notes

First of all,
No one cares
about you
and your tears

Ok I dont pity you
and i never will

this is aboyt osmeon

who cares who it is

but i dont need ot pity you
this is not baout me
Written September 21st, 2006

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  • Poetry poe
    June 22, 2007
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    perfect


  • RoNiN KaNaYe
    December 14, 2006
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    lol nice! hmmmss... OH GOD ITS ME!!.. wait... nah ^_^


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    September 21, 2006
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    love you more...

    I guess you just felt like writing this

    Princess it could never be about you because you are loved and cared for, especially by me

    Love you loads and loads...~Mum~


  • xBleedingxWerewolfx
    September 21, 2006
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    wtf hon? you hit the first stage be careful ok? i love you always
    ~*Mom*~


  • Velvet Rose Petals
    September 21, 2006
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    hey that is not true!!!!

    I LOVE YOU PINKY. This poem is so sad because none of this is true and if your friends make you feel this way they are not good friends.

    I LOVE YOU.
    Rose

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