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Classic Grace

Gently gliding on the wind
Through the dreams that they transcend,
Spinning there in perfect grace
With the air they interlace.
Such flawless and classic snow
Bringing laughter to those below,
Such that they will not outgrow.

Close your eyes and catch a few,
So cold is this freshest dew.
Make an angel on the ground
And feel solitude surround.
As your cold cheeks turn to pink
Come in for a chocolate drink
And watch the bright fire shrink.

Author notes

About snow, obviously.
Written September 21st, 2006

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  • Amun-Ra
    October 3, 2006
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    U kick booty on this one too. Awesome

  • OurxBeginning
    September 26, 2006
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    I loved this a lot, I love the snow and you really made me feel like I was there. It's one of those straight to the point writes. I'm going to add you to my faves, because I'm already loving your work.

    x


  • slightlyFey
    September 25, 2006
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    wonderful images...such innocence and beauty in your words congrats!
    Michelle Fey


  • Veronica Leigh
    September 21, 2006
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    oh wow. I LOVE this poem so much! It is so beautiful and the rhyme scheme is wonderful! I have never seen the snow before so you really hepled me to imagine it! Great job! Thank you for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck!


  • -- - -
    September 21, 2006
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    i really dread the winter
    (i dont even like the thought of it coming)
    but still this is a great poem.
    mayhaps if you share the hot chocolate i'll help you up aget you make your snow angel

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