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The Rescue of Lenore

In a prison hollow, dark and lonely

Away long 'n' far from her one and only

In quiet shadows she waits forlornly

Her desires and dreams whisk her northernly


Where white aspen branches in cold winds blow

Warm birch fires on winter's chilled nights glow

In land where cold crystal clear rivers flow

Flowing from mountain peaks covered with snow


Her heart sings sweetly of days long gone by

When she and her love would escape up high

Above the golden fields of barely and rye

Before the dark days when fate forced good-bye


Now she sits and waits for her rescue time

When she and her true love would again climb

Up the snowcapped mountains in the springtime

When their love raises the dawn of peacetime


These were the days of war between men 'n' elves

When valor equals might and lust compels

When sorcery 'n' craft were for evil spells

But one flame can give light where darkness dwells


Lucius was a faithful man 'n' brave knight

Who was taught that true valor stood for right

Honesty and truth was his main delight

In dark times, he became the source of light


In golden lands of the south he was born

Into a world at war divided 'n' torn

Among the painful brier, thistle and thorn

Where once grew full crops of soy bean and corn


The crucible fires of war destroyed the land

Northern elves turned farms into dry wasteland

Men had chopped forest 'n' trees of their woodland

Destruction 'n' death were the price war demands


In this world Lucius sought to bring peace

From wartime's oppression, he sought release

He dreamed of days when valor would increase

When concord would prevail and war would cease


In a dream he heard a wind's whisper say

Go to the eastern land far far away

A realm that knows only night never day

In a cave a fair elfin princess lay


This was the one path to peace, he was sure

He was destined to be the elf's savior

From this one aim he vowed not to detour

This was the way of true knightly valor


To the dark and evil land he would go

Over mountains high and through valleys low

Armed with sharpened sword and fiery bow

To meet an evil foe he did not know


Dragons and goblins would stand in his path

Servants of the Dark Lord's infernal wrath

For he desired no end to his bloodbath

The Dark Lord was the cause of this warpath


Density 'n' Hope were on Lucius' side

That day hundreds of evil goblins died

Dragons flew away back to caves to hide

The design of the Dark Lord was denied


An elf princess was rescued by a man

Lenore would soon return to her love's hand

Ushering endless peace throughout the land

The light of valor had shone through one man



Author notes

This is one poem in a series of poems. Together they will make a complete story. There are refences to other poems in the story.

There's a poem on the capture of Lenore. There's a poem about Lenore's love.
There's a poem on how the war began. If you like this one, check out the others. They can be found in "My Fantasy World"

Written September 20th, 2006

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  • An Eclipse Moon
    September 24, 2006
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    You're really good at ryhming your work. Even though I have been trying not to ryhme every line in my recent works. Someone told me I should try to write in different styles or something like that.

  • I-MightyApollo
    September 20, 2006
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    Awesome

    Serious this is awesome, a real tribute to the magic of poe. You kept the meter consist and beautiful, and the rhyming was flowing. However, you might want to develop your own style, as good as this, it'll only be remembered as the poem like Poe's, not your poem.


  • Tirrell
    September 20, 2006
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    Wonderful verse!!!!!

    Beauty is there! within your mystic style. I am sure that Poe is smiling down upon you. Cheers this was a good read.
    nicely written. wonderful flowing verse. weaves a captivating spell.
    Robert

  • PalmettoSky
    September 20, 2006
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    Thanks for such an encouraging poem. I really enjoyed reading it.you have a very distinct way of writing. You have your own voice....you always write like YOU. This is the kind of poem I like, something to inspire one to look up and be hopeful.This poem is so filled with an uplifting spirit. It should make anyone feel good. It did me. This will connect with a lot of people along with making the rest of us think within these lines with you.I can really relate to this - I think we all can to some extent! Excellent phrasing and poetic restraint combine to make this an accomplished poem--I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, well done! I am glad I read it. thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work. Best of wishes to you. good luck in all that you do....peace always in all ways.


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 20, 2006
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    I didn't know this was a fantasy poem until midway, and by that time, I was enchanted. I haven't really gotten into the fantasy realm of poetry, but this is nice. You did a fine job with the rhyme and the flow. Lane


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 20, 2006
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    Excellant /intriguing

    A very good take off from several different types of fantasy stories I have read over the years. Very well written just as it is.


  • DramaStar
    September 20, 2006
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    wow! This is incredible! I love it so so much!

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